I woke up bright and early this morning to get a fresh start on my day. As I woke up I went to the kitchen where mom had breakfast cooked, I ate as fast as I could. When I finished eating I ran out the back door of my house. It was a beautiful day out, not to warm or not to cold it was just right. The tree in the back yard stood so tall, within the tree was the tree house not just any tree house, it was a magic tree house. Whenever I went into it and closed my eyes I would be transported to a new place, almost as if it was a dream.

Today was a special day, it was really special it just felt like a special day. I got in the tree house and closed my eyes. Next thing I knew I was in the middle of a village, not just any village but a village full of Native Americans running around, the place was full of T pees. The town was small but there were many people and children. I opened my eyes and I was back home.

I closed my eyes again and woke up in the forest, not a forest around the world, but the one a crossed the road from my house. The animals in the forest weren’t like the others around the world but like the ones from the movies I watch. It was like a cartoon, a cartoon I was actually in, it was really fun.

My eyes opened and I was back in my tree house, and mom was calling me for supper. I went in the house eat and went to my room and dreamt about where the three house would take me tomorrow.

Summary

Correct Incorrect Total 24 16 40

1- The team won (its) (it's) game. Did you win (yours)

(your's), (to)(too) (two)?

Its, yours, too

2- They left (their) (there) books (there) (their)

(they're).

Their, there

3- I hear (your) (you're) about to graduate.

You’re

4- (Its) (It's) nice that (there) (their) (they're)

friendly.

It’s, their

5- Although I get (alot) (a lot) of colds, I feel

(all right)(alright)now.

A lot, alright

6- (Whose) (Who's) prettier (then) (than) you?

Who’s, then

7- Are you tired? I'm out of (breathe) (breath),

(too) (to) (two).

Breathe, too

8- Run back and (fourth) (forth) from (hear) (here) to

(their) (there).

Forth, here, there

9- (Your) (You're) about to (loose) (lose) (your)(you're) book.

you’re, lose, your

10- Everyone will (accept) (except) the prize (accept)

(except) you.

Accept, except

11- Do you know (weather) (whether) or not he will give

me the prize.

whether

12- Many people (choose) (chose) to live in large cities.

chose

13- Is the doctor (through) (thorough) (threw) with my

exam?

through

14- What (affect) (effect) does the school (principle)

(principal) have on you?

effect, principal

15- What did he (advice) (advise) you to do? Did you take

his (advice)(advise)?

Advise, advice

16- (There) (Their) (They're) are (alot) (a lot) of (your)

you're) friends in the boat.

They’re, a lot, your

17- I will (buy) (by) a book (buy) (by) Ray Bradbury.

Buy,by

The top 5 places to visit are as follows:

1.   Barcelona-Spain

2.   Bahamas- Hawaii

3.   Florence- Italy

4.   Victoria Falls- Africa

5.   Pompeii-Rome

        Top 5 places to visit

In fifth place Pompeii, Rome, Pompeii is one of the older towns in Rome.  Pompeii was an ancient Roman city, buried by a volcanic eruption.

 

          In fourth place Victoria Falls, Africa, tourist have said that Victoria Falls is a must see if ever visiting Africa. 

     

             In third place Florence, Italy, Florence is one of the busiest places in Italy will all its shops and also many of its beaches.

     

           In second place we have Bahamas, Hawaii; the Bahamas is one of the most magnificent places in the world with its luxury beaches, hotels and resorts. 

           In first place Barcelona, Spain, I put this in first place because there are many things to do while in Spain, like if interested watch a Barcelona soccer game. There are also many historic building that you can visit.