Influencing change

            After watching “To Kill a Mockingbird”, I realized how badly black people were treated in the 30’s and how unfairly they actually were treated. This book and movie can influence change in many areas whether to how you treat people that are different then yourself.

            This movie can influence a lot of change, for one is how you treat people. In “To Kill a Mockingbird” a black person named Tom Robinson was convicted for rape, a crime he never even committed. A change in this could of shown back in the 30’s that people can be treated the same no matter how different they may have been.

            Change is not always necessarily a good thing, but in these terms change would be a great thing it could have changed the whole future on how people look at others. The way people were treated then could be entirely. The difference would be a great thing for the future people.

            Being such a popular book and movie it could influence many kids and young adults on how you should treat people fairly. When they grow up they will have an idea on the fairness they should give to people that are not as equal as they are.

            

1.           The first place I went was to Mr. Herb's but to my surprise when I opened the front door his house was empty. 

 The first place I went was to Mr. Herb's, but to my surprise when I opened the front door his house was empty.

2. I paused thinking of some kind of little fib to make it more fun then what it actually was

I paused, thinking of some kind of little fib to make it more fun then what it actually was. 

3. “This is how it went” said Josh 

“This is how it went” said Josh.

4.  Mr. Clean house was an ugly yellow color. 

Mr. Clean's house was an ugly yellow color. 


5. A silly lion wouldn't defeat me but I’m not going to risk waking a lion and hurting him. 

A silly lion couldn't defeat me, but I’m not going to risk waking a lion and hurting him. 


6.  The tree in the back yard stood so tall, within the tree was the tree house not just any tree house, it was a magic tree house. 

The tree in the back yard stood so tall. Within the tree was the tree house, but not just any tree house, it was a magic tree house. 
7. Its not that big, but its yellow with a blue roof. 

It’s not that big, but it’s yellow with a blue roof. 

8. No wonder he is in the old folk’s home, he shouldn’t be allowed to drive.

No wonder he is in the old folk’s home, he shouldn’t be allowed to drive.

9. It was shinny, I thought it was something I lost in the tree when I was playing astronaut a few days ago. 

It was shinny, I thought it was something I lost in the tree when I was playing astronaut a few days ago. 

10. She took her paper out and started to role it up so I went on the run again. 

She took her paper out and started to role it up so I went on the run again. 

11. So to save time we jumped the fence, not knowing that our neighbour was mowin the lawn we ran out in front of the strip he was mowing, that must of made him mad because he chased up quite a ways up the road.  
   So to save time we jumped the fence, not knowing that our neighbor was mowing the lawn we ran out in front of the strip he was mowing, that must have made him mad because he chased up quite a ways up the road. 

12. My dad seen me and said “I’m going to count to three if you don't get off the top of that car you are grounded for a week!".

My dad seen me and said “I’m going to count to three if you don't get off the top of that car you are grounded for a week!".


13. But I didn’t see anything scary I just seen a cute little puppy, the puppy had his collar caught on a branch. 
But I didn’t see anything scary I just seen a cute little puppy, the puppy had his collar caught on a branch. 

14. Jonah knew it was getting at least three o’clock and he needed to come home soon because he grandparents could already be worried sick. 

Jonah knew it was getting at least three o’clock and he needed to come home soon because he grandparents could already be worried sick. 

15. I let out a little yell when it turned on and he let out a chuckle and said in his friendly voice “Hey, Sorry if I startled ya!” 

I let out a little yell, when it turned on and he let out a little chuckle and said in his friendly voice “hey, sorry if I startled you!”

16. The world is such a sick and twisted place now, it’s not safe for children to go out by themselves when there’s maniacs such as rapists, murderers, etc. on the loose.

The world is such a sick and twisted place now, it’s not safe for children to go out by themselves when there’s maniacs such as rapists, murderers, etc. on the loose.

17. There is a maze and you must pass through at least five courses to have finished the maze.

There is a maze and you must pass through at least five courses to have finished the maze.

18.  later on that day I dicided to go for a little hunt back in the woods to see if I could get any birds or if I could spot a deer.

 Later on that day I decided to go for a little hunt back in the woods to see if I could get any birds or if I could spot a deer.  

                                           Letter to the future

To the people of the future, I put 5 things in this time capsule that I believe are important to the future so you could more understand the people of my time, whether it is to do with food, liquor, music and excreta. The world is probably a lot different than it is now, your technology is most likely insane and may not seem like much to you, just like the technology we have today doesn’t seem like much either. So many things must have changed like the cars and computers and music, I wish I was living to see the change in the earth, if the earth has survived for that long that is.  The way of life must have changed entirely to, maybe it’s easier to grow food then it was now, like some kinds of instant grow.  Good luck to you all and have a good life.

     5 Things to put in a time capsule

          The first thing I would put in the time capsule would be a can of soup. I would put a can of soup in because I would like to show what type of food we had now a days. It also would show the difference between the cans that we have today and how theirs looks. If their food is different then what we eat today it will show them what we would have to eat.

          The second thing I would put in is an mp3 player with my favorite songs on it. I would put in an mp3 in because it would show the people what we had to listen to. In a way the music on the mp3 could show what kind of a person I am. It also could you what our technology is now compared to the technology then.

          The third thing I would put in would be a pencil. 100 years from now the technology would scare you. I would put a pencil in because that what we used to write with and the kids of the future would use all computer technology. Putting in a pencil would show how much things changed over many years. It would also show how far technology has come along.

          The fourth thing I would put in would be a cell phone. I would put the cell phone to again show what our technology was like now. 100 years from now they are going to have many new phones that will be a lot different than ours. They could see what we had to use for technology.

          The fifth thing I would put into the time capsule would be a quart of Whiskey (Fireball). I would put a bottle of fireball in to show the

liquor that we had around now. Also maybe if still not in bad shape may give them a little buzz. 

I woke up bright and early this morning to get a fresh start on my day. As I woke up I went to the kitchen where mom had breakfast cooked, I ate as fast as I could. When I finished eating I ran out the back door of my house. It was a beautiful day out, not to warm or not to cold it was just right. The tree in the back yard stood so tall, within the tree was the tree house not just any tree house, it was a magic tree house. Whenever I went into it and closed my eyes I would be transported to a new place, almost as if it was a dream.

Today was a special day, it was really special it just felt like a special day. I got in the tree house and closed my eyes. Next thing I knew I was in the middle of a village, not just any village but a village full of Native Americans running around, the place was full of T pees. The town was small but there were many people and children. I opened my eyes and I was back home.

I closed my eyes again and woke up in the forest, not a forest around the world, but the one a crossed the road from my house. The animals in the forest weren’t like the others around the world but like the ones from the movies I watch. It was like a cartoon, a cartoon I was actually in, it was really fun.

My eyes opened and I was back in my tree house, and mom was calling me for supper. I went in the house eat and went to my room and dreamt about where the three house would take me tomorrow.

Summary

Correct Incorrect Total 24 16 40

1- The team won (its) (it's) game. Did you win (yours)

(your's), (to)(too) (two)?

Its, yours, too

2- They left (their) (there) books (there) (their)

(they're).

Their, there

3- I hear (your) (you're) about to graduate.

You’re

4- (Its) (It's) nice that (there) (their) (they're)

friendly.

It’s, their

5- Although I get (alot) (a lot) of colds, I feel

(all right)(alright)now.

A lot, alright

6- (Whose) (Who's) prettier (then) (than) you?

Who’s, then

7- Are you tired? I'm out of (breathe) (breath),

(too) (to) (two).

Breathe, too

8- Run back and (fourth) (forth) from (hear) (here) to

(their) (there).

Forth, here, there

9- (Your) (You're) about to (loose) (lose) (your)(you're) book.

you’re, lose, your

10- Everyone will (accept) (except) the prize (accept)

(except) you.

Accept, except

11- Do you know (weather) (whether) or not he will give

me the prize.

whether

12- Many people (choose) (chose) to live in large cities.

chose

13- Is the doctor (through) (thorough) (threw) with my

exam?

through

14- What (affect) (effect) does the school (principle)

(principal) have on you?

effect, principal

15- What did he (advice) (advise) you to do? Did you take

his (advice)(advise)?

Advise, advice

16- (There) (Their) (They're) are (alot) (a lot) of (your)

you're) friends in the boat.

They’re, a lot, your

17- I will (buy) (by) a book (buy) (by) Ray Bradbury.

Buy,by

The top 5 places to visit are as follows:

1.   Barcelona-Spain

2.   Bahamas- Hawaii

3.   Florence- Italy

4.   Victoria Falls- Africa

5.   Pompeii-Rome

        Top 5 places to visit

In fifth place Pompeii, Rome, Pompeii is one of the older towns in Rome.  Pompeii was an ancient Roman city, buried by a volcanic eruption.

 

          In fourth place Victoria Falls, Africa, tourist have said that Victoria Falls is a must see if ever visiting Africa. 

     

             In third place Florence, Italy, Florence is one of the busiest places in Italy will all its shops and also many of its beaches.

     

           In second place we have Bahamas, Hawaii; the Bahamas is one of the most magnificent places in the world with its luxury beaches, hotels and resorts. 

           In first place Barcelona, Spain, I put this in first place because there are many things to do while in Spain, like if interested watch a Barcelona soccer game. There are also many historic building that you can visit.